When I look over our script, I sometimes think the story arc resembles something from the TV series “Lost,” with subplots spinning off tangents introducing characters bringing new subplots.
All that intrigue works great on TV. “Lost” has had four years to weave its complex storyline and won’t be tying up loose ends until 2010. We have no such luxury here, and I’ve been worried we’d never find our way out of the morass.
David Benullo must have sensed my concern. A busy, working screenwriter, Dave checked out our project and saw an opportunity to help straighten things out. The key for him was to combine some of the loose story threads, beginning with the one involving the mystery-shrouded, cult-like group, The Order, which may be tied to a rash of murders.
“I was trying to stitch the pieces all together, and The Order felt like it would have committed the murders to retrieve the map,” he said, referring to Mayor Napolitano’s crudely drawn guide to the Wilshire corridor’s subterranean methane pockets.
“Who knows what goes on behind the walls of a compound like that? Especially in the higher echelons of power.”
In our script's newest pages, 23-27, Dave has brought Napolitano inside The Order in a twist that sets up the screenplay’s long middle section.
Is Napolitano serious when he hints to his friend Hendricks that he’s thinking about “joining a new religion” in order to get at some of the cult’s deep, dark secrets? Maybe, maybe not. But it’s clear that his involvement with this powerful group will fuel our story’s second act.
David had other concerns when creating The Order’s prefect, Patrick Duvane. “The hardest part was not making the villain mastermind a cliché,” he said. He did this by introducing Duvane at his laptop where, like seemingly everyone else in town, he’s banging out a screenplay.
No word from Dave if Duvane’s monitor should display the latest pages of “Right of Way,” but I don't think so.
That would be too much like “Lost.”
Effective business articles that will improve your business.
In the ever-evolving aerospace manufacturing and supply chain management landscape, achieving AS9100 certification is a testament to a company’s commitment to quality, safety, and continuous improvement. This globally recognised standard, … Read More
In a world where businesses are constantly seeking efficiency and sustainability, the shift towards digital document management has become more than a trend—it’s a necessity. At the heart of this … Read More
Picture guiding a vessel through unpredictable waters, where unforeseen storms can upheave even the best-laid plans. Leading a professional association mirrors this scenario closely. With the shifting sands of member … Read More
In the digital age, where attention is fragmented and competition for visibility is fierce, targeted engagement has emerged as a critical strategy for businesses aiming to connect meaningfully with their … Read More
In today’s competitive landscape, a company’s success hinges on the collective effort of its workforce. Even the most brilliant ideas and meticulously crafted plans can falter without a team that … Read More
In today’s fast-paced software development landscape, efficiency is paramount. Every minute counts, and any tool that can streamline processes and workflows becomes invaluable. Jira, a widely utilized project management tool, … Read More
Stakes in the building or construction industry are high. Constructing buildings and homes is costly and safety matters are important. Most customers are cautious and involved in the process, potentially … Read More
In the bustling heart of New York City, Sarah, a young entrepreneur, taps her phone to complete a transaction that, just a decade ago, would have required a time-consuming visit … Read More
Introduction The Artificial Intelligence dawn is transforming how people work and businesses operate. It is opening up a world of challenges and possibilities, making it a game changer for entrepreneurs … Read More
After getting the formula for your beverage manufacturing, the next important thing to consider is its packaging. Businesses must select a fitting package for their products to offer quality products … Read More
